Post by kale on Sept 25, 2006 5:19:37 GMT -5
WooOHOOOO!!!! SO BOARING!!!!!!
here's a fanfiction I made that has insecst!
U n a c c e p t a b l e
It all started when I was a kid. When I was 3, I discovered that I can manipulate shadows. I really didn’t know what I was doing back then; all I knew was that I was having fun. I had nothing to worry about. Since I was an only child, my parents spoiled me a bit. All was fine until one day; a man in a black suit came to our house. He said that I was ‘special’ and that I have to go to this ‘Alice academy’ place.
I ended up as a student at this so called Alice Academy. I became one of the trouble students in the school. It’s actually quite ironic, you see, my name is Tsubasa Hikari, witch means ‘wings of light’ but my reputation is the total opposite. I even played a trick on one of my teachers once, I ended up with a curse mark on my face, and it looks like a tiny black star tattoo below my right eye. Because of my reputation all the rest of the guys in our joined class got a bad rep.
One day when I was 4, my parents sent me a video tape. It was a video of my younger sister. I didn’t even know that my mom was pregnant. For some reason I was really exited about this, I kept sending letters to them, until slowly I came to love my sister even more. Years passed and it went on the same way. I eventually felt a strange longing for my sister. As we grew older, my feelings for her grew stronger. I thought to myself that I had to tell my parents, and so I did, I thought they’d understand and that they’d let us be, but I was expecting too much. Days, weeks, months passed, and I got no reply until one day, I was called to the teacher’s lounge, and my Mom and my dad were there. As a twelve year old I didn’t know what to expect. They asked me to take a walk with them around the campus, and so we did. They explained that they were once students in the academy. Moments of queer silence passed as we roamed further in the depths of the school. They then came to the point. They said that the longing I fell for my sister, Tenshin Hikari was ‘unacceptable’. What they said resulted in an argument between us, all of it was going nowhere, till my dad placed his hands on my eyes, and removed the ‘unusual’ emotions that I feel for my sister.
(His dad has an Alice that can remove and replace memories and or emotions of a person)
Two new students came to the academy one day and both of them were in the same joined class as me. They were Mikan Sakura and my sister Tenshin. I was glad that I could be with my sister, but somehow I felt that there’s some thing missing. Every time I’d look at her, I’d feel like there was something inside me that wanted to burst out. It was like I used to feel some thing else for her. I can’t help but fall deeper and deeper for her each day. I just can’t help thinking about her. Her hair as black as a starless sky, her bright jade eyes, her soft ivory white skin, her rose pink cheeks and her moist, luscious lips. I know she feels the same as me.
(Tenshin)
Tenshin’s point of view
I was born with a special power. I have an ‘Alice’ that’s called mater manipulation. I can turn an object into another item with the same value, but this Alice doesn’t work on humans or animals. I have an older brother that I love dearly. I kept on loving him and he kept on loving me. The emotions that I felt for him grew stronger as time passed. Even thou I couldn’t see him, an even if I don’t know haw he looks, or feels like, I love him.
My parents said that the reason he can’t be with us right now is because he’s studying. I couldn’t be with him. Although I haven’t seen, heard, or felt him before, I long for him. I told my parents what I really felt, and they just said that I was wrong, and that it’s impossible that I feel this, for he is my brother. How can I be wrong? When I feel that I am right?
One night my parents received a letter from my brother. It seemed to have an effect on them. That night, they went to my room right before my bed time. They said they we’re sorry that they had to do ‘this’. What did they mean? My father placed his hand on my eyes then, poof, the feelings I had for my brother were gone.
A man came to our house and discussed some business with my parents. Then before I knew it I was a student at the academy my brother goes to. I was so happy that for once I can actually see my brother. I felt such excitement running through my veins. Finally I could see him, the one person I love.
As years passed, the tension between us grew. We knew what we felt was unacceptable, but if you really long for someone, if you’d give up everything for them, don’t you think that the rules should make an exception?
Now I’m all grown up, I’m already 16. The emotions I’ve felt have gone stronger; the yearning I feel can’t be controlled. I’ve told him that I love him and he told me that he loves me too, so why can’t we be? I don’t understand why not.
Tsubasa’s Point Of View
Now that I’m an adult I’ve been thinking, I’m 20 and still the emotions I’ve felt for my sister never passed. All I think about is her. I breathe, dream, live, and love her. This just proves that this isn’t a childhood phase. These emotions are real, but I also have to think about her, and her needs. I want to make her happy. If we do end up together, what would become of us after all that? What would happen to us and the family that we’d build together? Her smiles, are they going to be true? Is she going to smile because she’s happy or because I want her to smile? How are we going to end up? What’s waiting for us after this lot is thru? Are we really going to be happy if we follow what our hearts tell us? Is this really what we want? Do I have what it takes to make her happy?
Mr. Hikari’s point of view
Our children have now grown up but it seems that nothing has changed. I’ve gotten rid of their former emotions, but they built up again. What they feel is unacceptable.
I’ve decided I’ll talk Tsubasa out of it. This can’t go on any longer.
I went to his school on a dull shady day; it was like some thing bad was to befall us. I talked to him, pleaded to him, to stop this foolishness, I told him, that telling Tenshin might hurt, but this will benefit the both of them sooner or later. He looked like he was about to just burst out in tears. To see my son, Tsubasa, the one who’s tough and who you’d think will NEVER cry was about to, right in front of me. Deep inside me I thought to my self, that this will all pass and they’d thank me.
Tsubasa’s point of view
Dad came that day, he told me what he thought was right, I told my self that he was right and that I should give up what I feel. I told Tenshin about my decision; she kept crying her eyes out on my chest the whole night. I told her that it’s not like I don’t love her, I sill do, as a sister, I think.
4 years later.
Mizaki’s (tsubasa’s wife) Point of view
Tsubasa and I have been classmates since nursery and we’ve been thru a lot. I always thought of him as just a friend an that I’ll never look at him differently, until one day when we were 14, 2 new students came to our joint class. Mikan, and his sister Tenshin. Since they came he only seemed to pay attention to them. Soon I came to see the fact that I was in love with Tsubasa, I was so jealous of the relationship the two siblings have developed. It seemed strange that they would love each other that way.
I thought that what I felt would just go to waist until that day. We were already in collage and I asked him what I thought was a pointless question; I asked if he’d go out with me. Amazingly he said yes. It seems that his former relationship with his sister disappeared to finally give way to what I feel. Our relation ship grew stronger as the years passed. And now were wed.
Tsubasa and I are living a nice, normal life outside the academy. Even if he does seem happy, I cant help but wonder if all this is real, I really still have doubts.
Tenshin’s point of view
Tsubasa said that he still loves me, but as a sister. I really didn’t think that what he said was all true, until he started dating Mizaki. I really wanted to wake up from this nightmare, but it really wasn’t possible.
They finally let me out of the school after I finished collage. The first thing I thought of doing was going to my brother. He welcomed me to his house, but it seemed that Mizaki was a bit nervous around me.
I still can’t help but love my brother in that ‘unacceptable’ way. Though I think he’s forgotten how he used to be.
Tsubasa told me that I’ve changed a lot, he said that I’m a lot prettier than before. Even if he said those things, I still can’t help but feel like crying, I really cant take all of it. I can’t bear seeing my self lie.
Tsubasa’s Point of view
Tenshin dropped by one day. My past memories just can’t help but surface. I don’t think I can keep it all in anymore. I’ve been hiding like a coward these past 4 years, and I’m determined to straighten everything out.
Before she left I told he alone that I still did love her like I used to, but she didn’t believe me.
Mizaki’s Point of view
Tenshin came that day, I couldn’t help but feel strange around her, like she brought something bad with her. As I thought, she did have misfortune with her. I over herd Tsubasa talking with her, he told her what he truly felt, I can’t believe that he’s been lying to me all this time. Terrible things followed, the whole month smelled like trouble.
Narrator’s point of view
Tenshin cried out of the house as Tsubasa ran after her. When he finally caught up,
“Tenshin, wait. You know that I’m telling the truth.”
“That can’t be. You don’t!”
After a short while they stopped. Tsubasa left Tenshin crying as he was about to burst out himself.
The matter was left behind as the tension inside Tsubasa and Tenshin build up. A short time later, they couldn’t take it any more,
Tenshin sat in front of a window on her bed. The sun was a bright orange; it looks so beautiful as it sets. She couldn’t help but think of the past, Tsubasa, the way he touched her, the way she’d feel when he told her that he loves her, the beating of his heart, his lips, and the kisses they’ve shared (2,000 words).
Tenshin held a medicine bottle in her hand. She took a good look at it. It was filled with a lethal poison that would kill you in a matter of Minuits. Tears rolled down her face as she swallowed the poison. It seemed a pity that she should die without telling the one she loved what she truly felt.
Tsubasa stood right outside of Tenshin’s apartment door, hoping to tell her what he really felt (again). He took a deep breath and knocked at her door. No one seemed to be there. His subconscious mind felt a need to open the door. He ran in to Tenshin’s bed room and saw Tenshin’s collapsed on the bed. He came near her body and tried to feel her pulse. All he felt was her cold unmoving body. Tears started pouring down his face as he took a long look at Tenshin. She had a peace full look on her face. He held her close to himself as he gave her one last kiss. The tears seem to never stop. He saw the bottle of poison on Tenshin’s hand. He held and observed it. With the hope of happiness with the one he loves in another lifetime he took in the poison and fell beside Tenshin. With the last of his stenght he held her close to him in thought of their Unacceptable feeling for each other.
here's a fanfiction I made that has insecst!
U n a c c e p t a b l e
It all started when I was a kid. When I was 3, I discovered that I can manipulate shadows. I really didn’t know what I was doing back then; all I knew was that I was having fun. I had nothing to worry about. Since I was an only child, my parents spoiled me a bit. All was fine until one day; a man in a black suit came to our house. He said that I was ‘special’ and that I have to go to this ‘Alice academy’ place.
I ended up as a student at this so called Alice Academy. I became one of the trouble students in the school. It’s actually quite ironic, you see, my name is Tsubasa Hikari, witch means ‘wings of light’ but my reputation is the total opposite. I even played a trick on one of my teachers once, I ended up with a curse mark on my face, and it looks like a tiny black star tattoo below my right eye. Because of my reputation all the rest of the guys in our joined class got a bad rep.
One day when I was 4, my parents sent me a video tape. It was a video of my younger sister. I didn’t even know that my mom was pregnant. For some reason I was really exited about this, I kept sending letters to them, until slowly I came to love my sister even more. Years passed and it went on the same way. I eventually felt a strange longing for my sister. As we grew older, my feelings for her grew stronger. I thought to myself that I had to tell my parents, and so I did, I thought they’d understand and that they’d let us be, but I was expecting too much. Days, weeks, months passed, and I got no reply until one day, I was called to the teacher’s lounge, and my Mom and my dad were there. As a twelve year old I didn’t know what to expect. They asked me to take a walk with them around the campus, and so we did. They explained that they were once students in the academy. Moments of queer silence passed as we roamed further in the depths of the school. They then came to the point. They said that the longing I fell for my sister, Tenshin Hikari was ‘unacceptable’. What they said resulted in an argument between us, all of it was going nowhere, till my dad placed his hands on my eyes, and removed the ‘unusual’ emotions that I feel for my sister.
(His dad has an Alice that can remove and replace memories and or emotions of a person)
Two new students came to the academy one day and both of them were in the same joined class as me. They were Mikan Sakura and my sister Tenshin. I was glad that I could be with my sister, but somehow I felt that there’s some thing missing. Every time I’d look at her, I’d feel like there was something inside me that wanted to burst out. It was like I used to feel some thing else for her. I can’t help but fall deeper and deeper for her each day. I just can’t help thinking about her. Her hair as black as a starless sky, her bright jade eyes, her soft ivory white skin, her rose pink cheeks and her moist, luscious lips. I know she feels the same as me.
(Tenshin)
Tenshin’s point of view
I was born with a special power. I have an ‘Alice’ that’s called mater manipulation. I can turn an object into another item with the same value, but this Alice doesn’t work on humans or animals. I have an older brother that I love dearly. I kept on loving him and he kept on loving me. The emotions that I felt for him grew stronger as time passed. Even thou I couldn’t see him, an even if I don’t know haw he looks, or feels like, I love him.
My parents said that the reason he can’t be with us right now is because he’s studying. I couldn’t be with him. Although I haven’t seen, heard, or felt him before, I long for him. I told my parents what I really felt, and they just said that I was wrong, and that it’s impossible that I feel this, for he is my brother. How can I be wrong? When I feel that I am right?
One night my parents received a letter from my brother. It seemed to have an effect on them. That night, they went to my room right before my bed time. They said they we’re sorry that they had to do ‘this’. What did they mean? My father placed his hand on my eyes then, poof, the feelings I had for my brother were gone.
A man came to our house and discussed some business with my parents. Then before I knew it I was a student at the academy my brother goes to. I was so happy that for once I can actually see my brother. I felt such excitement running through my veins. Finally I could see him, the one person I love.
As years passed, the tension between us grew. We knew what we felt was unacceptable, but if you really long for someone, if you’d give up everything for them, don’t you think that the rules should make an exception?
Now I’m all grown up, I’m already 16. The emotions I’ve felt have gone stronger; the yearning I feel can’t be controlled. I’ve told him that I love him and he told me that he loves me too, so why can’t we be? I don’t understand why not.
Tsubasa’s Point Of View
Now that I’m an adult I’ve been thinking, I’m 20 and still the emotions I’ve felt for my sister never passed. All I think about is her. I breathe, dream, live, and love her. This just proves that this isn’t a childhood phase. These emotions are real, but I also have to think about her, and her needs. I want to make her happy. If we do end up together, what would become of us after all that? What would happen to us and the family that we’d build together? Her smiles, are they going to be true? Is she going to smile because she’s happy or because I want her to smile? How are we going to end up? What’s waiting for us after this lot is thru? Are we really going to be happy if we follow what our hearts tell us? Is this really what we want? Do I have what it takes to make her happy?
Mr. Hikari’s point of view
Our children have now grown up but it seems that nothing has changed. I’ve gotten rid of their former emotions, but they built up again. What they feel is unacceptable.
I’ve decided I’ll talk Tsubasa out of it. This can’t go on any longer.
I went to his school on a dull shady day; it was like some thing bad was to befall us. I talked to him, pleaded to him, to stop this foolishness, I told him, that telling Tenshin might hurt, but this will benefit the both of them sooner or later. He looked like he was about to just burst out in tears. To see my son, Tsubasa, the one who’s tough and who you’d think will NEVER cry was about to, right in front of me. Deep inside me I thought to my self, that this will all pass and they’d thank me.
Tsubasa’s point of view
Dad came that day, he told me what he thought was right, I told my self that he was right and that I should give up what I feel. I told Tenshin about my decision; she kept crying her eyes out on my chest the whole night. I told her that it’s not like I don’t love her, I sill do, as a sister, I think.
4 years later.
Mizaki’s (tsubasa’s wife) Point of view
Tsubasa and I have been classmates since nursery and we’ve been thru a lot. I always thought of him as just a friend an that I’ll never look at him differently, until one day when we were 14, 2 new students came to our joint class. Mikan, and his sister Tenshin. Since they came he only seemed to pay attention to them. Soon I came to see the fact that I was in love with Tsubasa, I was so jealous of the relationship the two siblings have developed. It seemed strange that they would love each other that way.
I thought that what I felt would just go to waist until that day. We were already in collage and I asked him what I thought was a pointless question; I asked if he’d go out with me. Amazingly he said yes. It seems that his former relationship with his sister disappeared to finally give way to what I feel. Our relation ship grew stronger as the years passed. And now were wed.
Tsubasa and I are living a nice, normal life outside the academy. Even if he does seem happy, I cant help but wonder if all this is real, I really still have doubts.
Tenshin’s point of view
Tsubasa said that he still loves me, but as a sister. I really didn’t think that what he said was all true, until he started dating Mizaki. I really wanted to wake up from this nightmare, but it really wasn’t possible.
They finally let me out of the school after I finished collage. The first thing I thought of doing was going to my brother. He welcomed me to his house, but it seemed that Mizaki was a bit nervous around me.
I still can’t help but love my brother in that ‘unacceptable’ way. Though I think he’s forgotten how he used to be.
Tsubasa told me that I’ve changed a lot, he said that I’m a lot prettier than before. Even if he said those things, I still can’t help but feel like crying, I really cant take all of it. I can’t bear seeing my self lie.
Tsubasa’s Point of view
Tenshin dropped by one day. My past memories just can’t help but surface. I don’t think I can keep it all in anymore. I’ve been hiding like a coward these past 4 years, and I’m determined to straighten everything out.
Before she left I told he alone that I still did love her like I used to, but she didn’t believe me.
Mizaki’s Point of view
Tenshin came that day, I couldn’t help but feel strange around her, like she brought something bad with her. As I thought, she did have misfortune with her. I over herd Tsubasa talking with her, he told her what he truly felt, I can’t believe that he’s been lying to me all this time. Terrible things followed, the whole month smelled like trouble.
Narrator’s point of view
Tenshin cried out of the house as Tsubasa ran after her. When he finally caught up,
“Tenshin, wait. You know that I’m telling the truth.”
“That can’t be. You don’t!”
After a short while they stopped. Tsubasa left Tenshin crying as he was about to burst out himself.
The matter was left behind as the tension inside Tsubasa and Tenshin build up. A short time later, they couldn’t take it any more,
Tenshin sat in front of a window on her bed. The sun was a bright orange; it looks so beautiful as it sets. She couldn’t help but think of the past, Tsubasa, the way he touched her, the way she’d feel when he told her that he loves her, the beating of his heart, his lips, and the kisses they’ve shared (2,000 words).
Tenshin held a medicine bottle in her hand. She took a good look at it. It was filled with a lethal poison that would kill you in a matter of Minuits. Tears rolled down her face as she swallowed the poison. It seemed a pity that she should die without telling the one she loved what she truly felt.
Tsubasa stood right outside of Tenshin’s apartment door, hoping to tell her what he really felt (again). He took a deep breath and knocked at her door. No one seemed to be there. His subconscious mind felt a need to open the door. He ran in to Tenshin’s bed room and saw Tenshin’s collapsed on the bed. He came near her body and tried to feel her pulse. All he felt was her cold unmoving body. Tears started pouring down his face as he took a long look at Tenshin. She had a peace full look on her face. He held her close to himself as he gave her one last kiss. The tears seem to never stop. He saw the bottle of poison on Tenshin’s hand. He held and observed it. With the hope of happiness with the one he loves in another lifetime he took in the poison and fell beside Tenshin. With the last of his stenght he held her close to him in thought of their Unacceptable feeling for each other.
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